Neat Concept, Needs Polish
This game has a really neat concept. Im a big fan of the alternative style of play, and the puzzle motif (and Im not shy of reading).
The grammar made it a lot less fun to play though. When youre trying to build pre-determined sentences out of floating words, it becomes very difficult if the grammar is incorrect. The same thing goes for the anagram mini-game: some of the words were misspelled, making it really hard to pick them out. The fact that the mini-games give you "logic points" that help you get more actions for the next day would have been far more enticing with proper spelling and grammar.
All in all, the game would get 5 stars when cleaned up. As it stands I can only justify 3.
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Who Is The Killer (Episode One), v1.2